Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 8, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    I never understood it
    Thought it was left to rhyming
    either every other word, or every single line
    but then I learned about free verse
    thought i might rehearse
    Its kinda funny
    Sometimes life feels really sunny
    Not now, but sometime
    I hoped that it was every time
    Last poem I talked about delaying
    I cling to this writing, almost like I'm praying
    People say that this is good
    I don't know how to respond, I feel stiff as wood
    Thanks guys
    I'd like that order with shake and fries
    I throw out all the comparisons
    And I don't know why
    Sometimes I feel like I'm gonna cry
    I feel really lost
    Life brings with it such a high cost
    Thanks for listening
    I remember her eyes, so bright and glistening
    I'll find my way soon, I want to believe it
    Until then, or even after then, let my poetry show
    Life, expression, and all of these parts
    Faithfully, and without blemish, everything in their highs and lows.
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Great poem :D
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