Post you day, In one way, it in time, Must Rhyme

Discussion in 'The Coffee House' started by Prof.Bruttenholm, May 31, 2011.

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  1. Prof.Bruttenholm

    Prof.Bruttenholm Well-Known Member

    You must tell your day
    In one way
    keeping it in time
    you must rhyme

    No one liners
    No more whiners

    Belt it out if you're alone
    Use any word, use a homophone

    Just rhyme
    all the time

    You see I plan to take my life
    I'll not tell you but it shan't be with a knife

    My day is my own hell
    My mind is my own cell

    Don't believe that is fine
    Because my life is mine

    But everyday it's the same way
    I can hear the voice, I have no choice

    It tells me I am terribly, despicably, inexplicably, useless to society
    This ever building voice only adds to my anxiety

    On my last day, I'll choose to say, on the date in the forum hall
    I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!

    Now it's your turn
    May the words soothe or burn

    Tell your day
    In one way
    Keep in time
    It must rhyme
  2. Stripe

    Stripe Well-Known Member

    Answering this thread
    While wanting to be dead
    Could be better
    Than writing that letter

    But then, only time
    Or maybe a good rhyme
    Will show me how
    To live for the now.
  3. Prof.Bruttenholm

    Prof.Bruttenholm Well-Known Member

    How can one be sad or mad
    When rhyming only makes us glad

    The heart can't fight
    A rhyming songs might

    We all feel the need to sing
    To dance and prance and spring

    I'm giving you all a chance to share how you feel
    No matter your rhyming, or the timing, all you need is zeal

    Show the world, your thoughts unfurled
    Now in the time, let's all rhyme

    For you see, I most consciously want to end my life
    But in my mind, a storm unwinds, the ebb and flow of strife

    Part of me,believes in destiny and that choice is but a lie
    Yet another part, speaks from my heart, telling me, my life is to follow my cry
    With this rhyme I hope in time to feel a freedom ringing
    even if I sit quietly, all the while never singing
    The voice that tells me I am wrong
    Can not stop my hearts true song
  4. dazzle11215

    dazzle11215 Staff Alumni

    i learn to hope
    i learn to cope

    it's all okay
    in my world today

    i don't know why
    i want to try

    to live, to thrive
    to even survive

    if i could wish
    upon a fish

    you'll feel alright
    not give up the fight
  5. Dreamland

    Dreamland Well-Known Member

    Today I've been feeling quite well
    For reasons too many to tell.
    I've got a new job,
    I don't feel like a slob,
    And I'm not in my personal Hell!
  6. Prof.Bruttenholm

    Prof.Bruttenholm Well-Known Member

    I'm glad this game hasn't bored
    Or made the forum members say "oh lord"

    As each rhyme is placed
    My mind is erased

    Of bad thoughts and feelings
    replaced with joy and healings
  7. Stripe

    Stripe Well-Known Member

    The sun is up
    I'm feeling down
    Woke this morning
    Wearing a frown
  8. dazzle11215

    dazzle11215 Staff Alumni

    saw my therapist today
    i hope she never goes away

    i love her so much
    i might have a little crush

    also paid the rent
    now the money's all spent

    so broke it's rice for dinner
    hope it makes me thinner

    hope y'all hang in there
    keep posting, and SHARE

  9. dazzle11215

    dazzle11215 Staff Alumni

    p.s. i love this thread
    i hope it doesn't go dead
  10. Prof.Bruttenholm

    Prof.Bruttenholm Well-Known Member

    You'd better tow the line you see
    If you want like this post as badly as me

    To keep it going each single day
    You must keep rhyming this same way
  11. dazzle11215

    dazzle11215 Staff Alumni

    just made a veggie stir fry
    it's so hot, don't ask why

    my cat has a thick furry coat
    he wishes he was in a boat

    a little ice
    would be nice

    it's 40 degrees today
    do i miss winter, no way

    but i can't stand the heat
    makes me so beat

    hope your day was grand
    maybe you played in the sand
  12. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    I'm stuck here
    So much fear

    I hate this place
    Get the hell out of my face

    I come on this site
    It helps me win the fight

    Don't really know what to say
    Just glad that I'm here for another day
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