Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by sweetwhisper, Dec 6, 2013.

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  1. sweetwhisper

    sweetwhisper Well-Known Member

    I walk in my room
    And close the door shut,
    Emotion of fear rises
    Its the feeling in my gut.

    As I lay on the bed
    My legs become tight,
    Already lost energy
    To stand up and fight.

    I consistently try
    To pick myself up,
    But this time round
    I've ran out of luck.

    So I lie here tearful
    In a painful struggle,
    Thinking of my life
    Being a constant juggle.

    I can't take this anymore
    I'm not strong enough,
    Emotions running wild
    I'm not at all tough.

    Please just take me away
    I want to leave this world,
    My simple path of life
    Has diverted and curled.

    There's no one to help
    So I'll battle alone,
    But I'm no soldier
    I'm weak to the bone.

    My only solution
    That makes most sense,
    Is to end my journey
    It's my greatest defense.

    I take a deep breath
    And do what I plan,
    My eyes gently close
    Into a short lifespan.
  2. demuredawn

    demuredawn Well-Known Member

    so sorry you feel life is not worth keeping in the fight for... and that it has let you down... but, ending it now would be sad indeed...

    there is a saying i would like to share with you that i keep hung on my wall behind my pc...

    "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away."

    I hope you will choose to live to see those moments... you deserve them
  3. sweetwhisper

    sweetwhisper Well-Known Member

    Thank you for your kind words and for sharing that with me, it really sunk in, teaches that life is not about how long we live but about the smiles and memories that take our breath away :) That's true.
  4. demuredawn

    demuredawn Well-Known Member

    you're welcome... its one of the reasons i choose to live... cuz i think after all the shyt i've been thru in life, i deserve to see those moments... i think the same is true of you
  5. sweetwhisper

    sweetwhisper Well-Known Member

    That is true, you do deserve to see those moments. I hope I can believe this in myself one day.
  6. demuredawn

    demuredawn Well-Known Member

    i hope you can too... cuz i think anyone that suffers.. deserves those moments most
  7. sweetwhisper

    sweetwhisper Well-Known Member

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