Prayers [ 2 poems in one thread ] [trig?]

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Isa, Apr 9, 2006.

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  1. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Oh dear lord please dearly rest
    Those i love and know the best
    Blessed be those in my power
    Bless my friends hour by hour
    Bless my family as they sleep
    Bless their souls forever keep
    Bless my mummy, Bless my dad,
    Bless anyone whose ever sad,
    Bless their friends and family,
    And if I die, oh lord, bless me.


    oh dear lord please dearly rest
    those i slash and scar the best
    those who never see my smiles
    those who follow my coffin down the aisle
    oh dear lord please send to heaven
    those on whom i inflicted pain
    those who dealth with this 24 7
    those who i drove insane
    oh dear lord please take care of
    those i leave behind
    those i dont give a fuck about you see
    cos im totally outof my mind
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Those are very nively put, and I like them... well done. :)

  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow powerful...
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poems!
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