-- 'Pretty Little Girl.'

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  1. so.overratedx

    so.overratedx Active Member

    Just a poem I apparently wrote in March, in one of my down moods I'm sure, since that's usually only when I can write. Not sure how good it is. Enjoy though.

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    oh, pretty little girl
    with those bruises on your ego
    that faded smile on your lips
    the dimmed glimmer in your eyes
    tell me, please
    tell me what made you this way
    who made you this way
    tell me why your smile has become fake
    why you hide your pretty face from the world
    do you think they've shut you out?
    do you believe no one cares?
    pretty girl, please come out
    show your face
    show us who you are
    no fake smile, but something real
    no watered eyes, but something with glitter
    show the world who you are
    let those bruises heal
    you may be scared, pretty girl
    it may take a long while
    but you're strong enough
    tell us how this happened
    tell us who did this to you
    who damaged you so
    we'll ask them why
    ask them how
    how they could damage
    damage a sweet girl so pure
    we'll make them pay
    for what they did
    to such a sweet,
    pretty little girl like you
    because you are strong
    you are sweet
    you will make it
    make it through
    all you've been through
    and all you will go through
    because you are strong pretty little girl
    oh, pretty little girl you are strong
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You are strong and i enjoyed your poem it tells so much.
     
  3. so.overratedx

    so.overratedx Active Member

    Thank you. n___n;
     
  4. Tobes

    Tobes Well-Known Member

    That poem was great. Full of emotion and well written. Nice work.
     
  5. so.overratedx

    so.overratedx Active Member

    Thank you again. :3
     
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