Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Twitch, Apr 15, 2008.

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  1. Twitch

    Twitch Member

    Tell me all these lies,
    and yet, you turn away.
    I just wish that
    you'd look me in the eyes.
    I ask you questions;
    you give me no answers.
    I seek help.
    You give me none.
    Just because I'm broken
    doesn't mean I don't need truth.
    Can't you give me something
    a little peace of mind
    to rest my head upon?

    The truth won't prevail.
    I know that much.
    It doesn't matter.
    Life will go on.
    Can't you help me,
    if just to cope?

    I don't know who.
    I don't know why.
    All I know is that
    I'm suffering.
    Empathy means there's
    no life for myself,
    but God damn it;
    help me out.
    I need to save someone,
    if I can't save myself,
    and for God's sake,
    help me out.

    I can't go through life,
    feeling this Hell inside,
    so help me; save someone,
    if you can't save yourself.
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    The way it flows sounds like it could be a song. It's melodic. I love it!
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    nice poem:smile:
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