Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Feb 8, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Leave me
    I want to curl in my corner
    Leave me please
    Im lost in my order
    I beg you, go
    I dont want you here
    I dont want you to know
    The things that I fear
    Just leave me alone
    I'll be trapped in my corner
    I'll fight through my tears
    'Till you're lost in my order
    You'll fight me to stay
    I'll fight 'till you're done
    You'll beg me to stay
    I'll push 'till you're gone
    Now go, leave me please
    I cant be held responsible
    For saying these things
    If you force me to sit
    Listen to you
    I'll shut out your memory
    I'll push 'till you're through.

  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    WOW! at a lost for words...I like your writing...

    There is something about it that makes me feel alove, and living your poems, you piece of art!

  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    My feelings are my writing...Im so sorry you understand
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    dont be sorry, because i have a heart that understand the beauty in the writing, and your poems tell the story you live, that makes me understand them, i wouldnt just say that to anyone as long as i was able to actually picture it in my mind, and heart.
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Nice writing :hug:
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