Random Poem Thing

Discussion in 'Suicidal Thoughts and Feelings' started by precious15, Aug 16, 2007.

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  1. precious15

    precious15 Guest

    Sorry if this sucks, just a thought in poem form

    A suicide note would start with the reason for dying:
    My ability to care is sometimes trying, lacking like a burnt out lighter:
    Absorbing air, not knowing what to do
    What to be or where to go
    We are a minority yet everybody thinks it,
    Envisioning death as they wish it each and every night
    Life would seem too right,
    So we stay hidden in the darkness
    Congregate with others like us, lives burning and crashing
    Time is passing as you live with such regret
    Suicidal or not, every minute brings you closer to death
    So here, show you how it’s finished
    End with an “I love you” to all friends who really cared
    Imagine their pain reading and seeing what you’ve done
    Why be the one to bring that pain
    Whye the one to blame
    for all of your mistakes...
  2. mike308

    mike308 Well-Known Member

    I like it,
    but I when/if I commit suicide I wouldn't bother to leave a note.
    Why bother?
    I don't have anyone close enought to write one too.
  3. Pete_D_LDN

    Pete_D_LDN Guest

    Like the poem. Im two minds whether to leave a note. I would try to explain how i feel and let my family know that I always cared and thought about them even though I never showed it. Maybe it would help, maybe not
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