Ratte The Cage

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Jan 30, 2012.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    - Rattle The Cage -​

    Rattle the cage, how hard to gauge, the vacant gaze
    How do I feel? Do I feel? I thought I felt a feeling
    But who knows, the anger grows, there we go, its something
    Inside out, right side in, all reasons growing thin
    Self doubt with self hate, no use trying to stipulate pretend conditions
    Minus self, plus a bit of someone else, and divided by a scream
    My mind is pulling at my head, about to brake the seams​
  2. Tmacster1

    Tmacster1 Well-Known Member

    Awesome poem. It sounds very interesting which I like about these kind of poms. I hope you continue to write and share them. :)

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