Razor Blade

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by WickedTruth, Apr 9, 2013.

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  1. WickedTruth

    WickedTruth Member

    Hello old friend
    It's been awhile
    I'm sorry for ignoring you
    Did you miss me?
    I'm sure you did
    Mom doesn't like you
    Says you're bad company
    That you hurt me
    Dad doesn't care
    He never does
    Dr Frost says we need to say goodbye
    But I don't like goodbyes friend
    I need you
    And you need me, right?
    No, please don't cry
    I won't leave you
    It's okay
    We'll be together
    I Promise
    You just
    You gotta hide okay
    From mom
    She can't see you
    Or she'll send us away
    Get under my sleeve
    No, please don't cry
    I'm sorry
    I'll fix you soon
    I've got to pretend now
    Pretend that we aren't friends
    I'm not leaving you though
    I'll be back soon
    Just let me...
    Friend, please
    I know you're lonely
    Under used
    But you have to hide
    Just for a while
    I can't play yet friend
    I'll just finis-
    Stop begging
    I'll play soon
    Stop pleading
    Stop whining
    Soon I promise
    Stop asking
    STOP, just stop
    FINE! I'll play
    But mom can't see
    You know that right?
    Under my sleeve
    my pants
    my shirt
    Mark me
    You can cry now
    Mom's gone for a while
    I'm sorry friend
    You won't leave right?
    I love you
    Need you
    We'll be okay
    Shhhhh now
    I'll clean us up
    Mom won't see
    Won't know
    Stop crying now friend
    Save your tears for tomorrow
    We'll be okay
    We'll be okay
  2. morning rush

    morning rush Well-Known Member

    wow that was intense. I like how it's a dialogue...you should definitely get it published...
  3. WickedTruth

    WickedTruth Member

    Thank you :)
    Didn't really think it was any good, more or less just needed to write something ya know.
    But thanks :D
  4. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Eccentric writer, general weirdo, heedless heathen

    :hug: I can relate to this one a lot, especially since I started cutting again after 2 months. So I know how hard that addiction can be to break.
  5. elevatorpass

    elevatorpass Active Member

    a very good lament... and nothing wrong with just writing.. I encourage that.. it helps wicked truth x
  6. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

    ever sick
  7. svm299

    svm299 Member

    Wow... I am a cutter. To me this is beautiful. In such a twisted way huh? I love the way you wrote this.
  8. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    It is well written hun but very sad that you cannot reach out to your mom to someone to get better coping skills You deserve only compassion hun not self harm
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