'Real' (A song not a Poem)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by itachi, Jan 5, 2007.

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  1. itachi

    itachi Well-Known Member

    I wasn't sure where this was suppost to go or wether i every wanted to post it but here goes.
    (keep in mind i haven't completely finished it)

    Its Over
    I’m Drowning
    In a sea of dark thoughts
    Dark feelings and broken Hearts

    And I’m Not Sure
    What my life was like before
    And all the good things I’ve found
    Simply fade into the background
    These things they wear me down.

    At Times Like this you will find
    Me in a dark place in my mind
    And every step I take
    Feels like I’m about to break
    These feelings I cannot shake

    And everywhere I go
    I try to keep within the flow
    At every concert every show
    All these feelings do is grow
    Why won’t these scars ever heal?
    I feel like I’m just not real

    And as I sit in my room
    Staring blankly through the gloom
    Feelings come back to me again
    All the hurt all the pain
    All the hail all the rain
    All the crying and the shame

    And you know….



    [Chorus] X2

    And as I’m sinking down
    I realize I don’t wanna drown
    Just need someone to hold my hand.
    And lead me to a happy land.
    Just some help some hope to heal
    And to finally be real.

    Written By Josh

    This song is deadicated to, a very special friend on here, She knows who is, and how special she is to me.
    :hug: :cheekkiss Luv ya sweetie
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  2. itachi

    itachi Well-Known Member

    I just read it again. :(

    Its Shit

    Don't bother reading it if you haven't already
  3. Actually I thought it was a great expression, and echoes so much of what we feel here... And besides... Who is qualified to judge your very own feelings? Keep posting. I though it was masterful in knowing yourself...

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