Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by see, Aug 22, 2007.

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  1. see

    see Well-Known Member

    Words elude emotions scream death calls
    frustration prevails anger rages
    for amidst thousands loneliness surrounds
    and understanding evades….

    Steal a breath fake a day and stand brave……

    What is the meaning of life when every
    breath is stolen, when love is a concept
    so easily faked and life is taken from those who deserve
    and spared for those who deserve not!
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    This poem is very powerful. The way that you worded it makes someone stand up and look and think about what was said. It is also deep and emotional. If you ever need to talk just remember I am here for you. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great writing! :heart:
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