Red alert

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ACRon, May 10, 2006.

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  1. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Red alert,
    the passion flutters
    hmmmm, so good
    a presence
    like soul
    vanilla pods crushed
    ascending essence

    A bag of joy
    for memory to endure
    Now its dirge, dirge
    And I want more?

    a thin white curse,
    was there a choice?
    Natures disperse
    "can I have a fire on my birthday?"
    the reality burns
    as I fly away thirsty
    and land in cinder
    empty, void
    And without choice
     
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  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    its got great emotion to the poem...

    Every well done...

    BP
     
  3. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    a well written poem. :hug:
     
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