red liquid

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by soulreaper, Jul 28, 2014.

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  1. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

    once my strenght, now my weakness
    suck in my red liquid
    suck in my soul
    my heart beats fast

    feel the fire in your veins
    feel the light explode your brain
    i hope your heart explodes
    for what you took from me

    take in my red liquid
    until the fire fills your veins
    take in my soul
    until the light explodes your brain

    what is your end
    is my beginning
    what was once my strenght
    is now your weakness
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  2. Newguy12

    Newguy12 Member

    Very interesting poem. I enjoyed it very much and hope you write more like it.
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