rememberance

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  1. tintin

    tintin Guest

    mum i miss you ever so much
    all i want is your tender touch
    you laughing eyes and smiling face
    not to mention your warm embrace

    i rememba the day you died like it was today
    the day was wet the sky was gray
    the car ride to visit you was taking so long
    i wanted to see you before you were gone

    as i walked in the nurse was there
    pusing thru fluids and smoothing your hair
    you smiled weakly as i sat down beside
    tried not to show the worry i felt inside

    but as time got by you grew more weak
    and the mood in the room went from hopeful to bleak
    then as you shut your eyes never to open once more
    i felt my stomach hit the floor

    as the doctors buzzed round trying to bring you round
    the room was quiet beeping was the only sound
    as we all waited with bated breath
    for the doctor to brink you back from death

    they tried for 20mins to open your eyes
    by this point i knew in my heart you had died
    because my heart felt empty my head was sore
    i wanted your eyes to open just once more

    i rememba visitin you in the chapel of rest
    you was laying in the coffin with your hands by your chest
    i reached for your hand.. it was ice cold
    i wanted to cry but did as was told
    i held in all the tears and ther they stil remain
    they are all i have left of you till we meet again

    R.I.P MUM 24/06/1972-19/02/2003

    gone but never forgotten
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Lovely but very sad poem :hug:
     
  3. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    :hug: becca
     
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