Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 25, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member


    My residue condemns me
    This trail of slime leading to past deeds
    Is the judge handing out a specially tailored sentence

    A soul eater living
    Alongside another parasite
    Feasting like a King
    Greedy like any man
    This residue holds firm
    Its claws clutching tight

    Past elements colliding together
    Forming a hybrid enemy
    United under the flag of
    “Self-Destruction” ​
  2. MrDepressed

    MrDepressed Guest

    I like it.. keep on writing.
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Nah, it's crap. Thing is, I can't stop this pathetic form of self-expression (well, for me it's pathetic). Thanks for the compliment though.
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