"Reveal My Emptiness"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Feb 21, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    “Reveal My Emptiness”

    Postulating...moving forward
    Against the endless daze
    Puzzled at the lack of substance
    And the abundance of emptiness

    Have you ever felt like nothing can grow from something?
    Again I postulate, assuming there is nothing
    When perhaps it grows invisible
    Upon my sight
    Like a fading light
    ...Or a runaway shadow

    I wallow in this filth
    Of questioning and pursuing of enigmas
    In this pursuing I fall further
    down the drain
    Losing what character and substance
    I have maintained

    For you, servant of truth
    I reveal my emptiness


    ...Or something similar
     
  2. mike25

    mike25 Well-Known Member

    Cool poem.
     
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

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