Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Feb 4, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    To blow the routine
    and get up again
    pick up off the floor
    get up once more, and then
    step same sad steps
    breathe same sad breath
    close all the doors
    inhale your death
    by giveing you're trying
    by liveing you're dyieng
    exposeing yourself
    to the pain of surviveing
    endorse reinforcement
    emotional storage
    advertise your enforcement
    cauterize angry torrents.

    You may read this out loud
    let your tounge trip all through it
    but said in your head
    you'll discover the current.

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    :clap: :cheer: :thumbup: :eek:hmy: :flowers: :hug: :yeah:

    You are :censored: awesome!!!:yes:

    love, Sooz

    I like it all, but especially the last four lines. :thumbup:
  3. Pills

    Pills Well-Known Member

    Yeah, the last four lines are quite amazing.
  4. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    thanks guys...

    you've made me smile today.

  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    That was amazing! I Loved it!
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    amazing :heart:
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