Sacred Pact

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  1. Sacred Pact

    I release my right to save you
    But I do not relinquish
    my right to care
    I admit I cannot save you
    but I’ll listen to
    all that ails you,
    when you think that you have failed
    I cannot tell the future
    but I hope that you were in it
    I wish to take away your pain
    but know I cannot own it
    I wish that you would hear me
    when I say you’re not alone,
    though lonely are your thoughts
    I’ll share them
    For I too, have my own

  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I like this one a lot... for lack of anything better to say.... sorry I dont have anything much to say other than that I think its brilliant haha.

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I also think it's brilliant!:smile: I like it very much - it's a gem!!:smile: :smile: You express yourself so damn well!


  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    you are so great...

    it was a great poem...

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