School Poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by bjoern, Jul 26, 2008.

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  1. bjoern

    bjoern Active Member

    Just a poem I wrote in school.

    This is in my pray,
    A dream to be free.
    I want to fly away;
    I want to be a bee.

    Everyday at eight,
    I’ll fly away to you.
    This is in my faith,
    Come with me into the blue.

    But one day I’ll fly far away,
    Away from you and mother earth.
    My dream is not to stay,
    but away from place of birth.

    Tomorrow I’ll be gone,
    for never to return.
    I’ll fly away forever;
    this is where my life makes a turn.

    This is the end;
    this is where I’ll say good-bye.
    Thanks for all the time we’ve spend.
    Please don’t ask me why.

    I want you to be,
    the happiest of them all.
    Without me you are free,
    I wan't even give you a call.

    So forget all about the bee,
    the little bee's life has passed.
    My only wish was to be free,
    and free I am at last...

    Sorry for my bad english :p
  2. Tnecniv

    Tnecniv Well-Known Member

    NICE! I liked it :laugh: and it was real, not everyone wrights like that :biggrin: completly honest, I loved it =D
  3. bjoern

    bjoern Active Member

    Thank you =D

    And I loved the poem under your comment! It was great! Better than mine
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  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poem hun , i love it :biggrin:
  5. bjoern

    bjoern Active Member

    Thank you :smile:
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