see me...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Apr 2, 2012.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    i shiver wish nerves
    thinking in fear
    will you even remember the problem?

    i know that you heard,
    i wonder if you still hear,
    i dont know if i can solve them....

    im scared and confused
    hurt and lonely
    too many emotions inside,

    i trust only you
    i am good in name only,
    hurt through to the pride.

    i hate who i am,
    i hope this you see
    for this needs understood

    my face is a scam,
    my sould is of grease,
    my eyes are not what should.

    i beg you to open your heart,
    i will try too
    someone to let me in,

    i know its not smart,
    but my mind is completely through,
    ill show yout he scars on my skin

    know me for me
    just know who i am
    thats all i ask of you

    i want you to see
    my one simple plan
    i hope to show you the truth...
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Thorn, I'm sure many of us here have felt that desire to just be seen and known. Your poem also seems to speak of the hope for acceptance. I wish and hope that you find these things. :smile:
  3. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    you hit the bird in the eye. im glad im able to express so clearly in my writing, and thanks so much for reading and actually listening... it means so much to me...
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