septic (revised)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Jun 23, 2008.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    balancing on the edge
    poised poisonous and old
    I am the septic sceptic
    indignantly tired and cold
    diseased and gangrenous
    festering feast for vermin
    I am the septic sceptic
    and bitterly discerning

    I am my most
    critical critic

    and yours

    for I doubt everything
    I question the sky
    the bastard who ‘made’ me
    and I openly decry
    the whole wretched lot
    and my reason for being
    this ‘imagined’ pain
    that you are clearly not seeing
    dear god (for I will use small case)
    silence me now
    and in which case
    I will readily repent
    feel the love that you sent
    but until that day
    (and actually, either way)

    I will remain the
    soulless septic sceptic


    abundantly alone
     
  2. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    Thank you for sharing. :hug:
     
  3. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Ali u ROCK :wootrock:

    I loved it!!
     
  4. :blink:

    Y'know...

    You are so awesomely good...

    it is

    S-C-A-R-Y


    :blink:
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You are so damn good at describing my own feelings which I cannot put into words.

    I hope it helps you hang on if only to hang onto my love and friendship.

    :hug:
     
  6. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    Thank you all for reading and taking the time out to reply.

    It means a lot
    :wink:

    ~Lentil x
     
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