shadows of me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by jane doe, Jan 6, 2007.

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  1. jane doe

    jane doe Well-Known Member

    white like the moon
    natural as breathing
    simple as the snow
    you´ve taken everything
    that once, belong to me
    you are always present in my thoughts
    an i, a fool who doesn´t undrstand anything
    i´ve dedicated my life to you
    and that´´s the way i knew you would answer my call
    taking away everything from me
    taking away everyone who ever loved me
    taking away...who i used to be
    and you let only a shadow
    of the happy woman i was once
    and this shadow
    walks lonely,drawning itself on tears
    this shadow is... may be
    the memory of me
    but i just know
    this shadow this shadow wants the sun comes out
    so it can rest in peace at last.


    i hope you like it:)
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow... great poem hun...

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Lovely!!:smile: I like it very much:smile: :smile:

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