shape of sadness

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by VALIS, Oct 16, 2011.

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  1. VALIS

    VALIS Well-Known Member

    waiting waiting
    long minutes pass
    waiting for someone
    sad song drowns me in sound
    making the waves in my tears
    the time I need to be alone
    is the most painful I remember
    the unbearable loneliness
    I’ll fight against it as I do
    What I need is to sit right here
    Telephone unplugged, music loud
    Tears streaming down
    The moment when I realized
    no one was coming
    no one was coming
    no one would be coming
    there would be no arms
    no voices, no heads to think
    agape, floating in front of me
    no one to say yes, no, no, no
    and I always needed someone
    just an empty room full of possibilities
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    so well written hun so sad hugs
     
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Well done! I especially like the concepts in "sad song drowns me sound / making the waves in my tears."
     
  4. VALIS

    VALIS Well-Known Member

    Thanks y'all
    The writing I've been doing is really sloppy and disorganized but the feelings are extremely painful. It's nice to hear kind words

    :wacko:
     
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