she flew away

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by mare, Aug 21, 2011.

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  1. mare

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    as she wanders down her path
    many eyes gaze at her
    she tries to conceal her self
    in her world, so far away

    she wanted to fly
    but went for a dive
    and she broke away

    she looked in her eyes
    but there wasn't a surprise
    so she cried away

    there was a loud sound
    as she fell on the ground
    and flew away


    she wanted to fly
    but went for a dive
    and she broke away

    she looked in her eyes
    but there wasn't a surprise
    so she cried away

    there was a loud sound
    as she fell on the ground
    and flew away


    well i took all of your advice and started to play again...now i focus all my thoughts on the music.HEre are the lyrics of a song so give me your opinions
    p.s.i don't know does the name of the song correspond with the song.I put it cause i had to put something as the name
     
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