She is the girl *triggering & graphic**

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  1. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Pardon me for my honesty. Pardon me while I sit here for awhile and contemplate my existence. Here is something I wrote while I pondered. Sorry for the brutality of it all.

    SHE IS THE GIRL

    She is the girl
    with cum stained lips
    with whore stitched
    across her heart
    she has dirty knees
    from being on the ground
    face pressed into the dirt
    messed up hair
    tears hidden behind her eyes
    She is the girl
    with bruises on her thighs
    with teeth marks everywhere
    she always smiles
    to the filthy guys
    who will do their worst
    because that’s all she’s worth
    she has a glass heart
    and everytime she’s fucked
    for pleasure, not for love
    another piece breaks off
    shattering her perception
    that maybe love does exist
    beyond the bite marks
    beyond the cum stained lips
    beyond the fucked up life
    she lives…
    but there is no love
    She is the girl
    that every guy goes to
    to get off
    and walk away
    to let off some steam
    and get his rocks off
    She is the girl
    with cum stained lips
    with whore stitched
    across her heart
    she has dirty knees
    from being on the ground
    face pressed in the dirt
    messed up hair
    tears hidden behind her eyes
    .
    .
    .
    I am the girl.



    ~2007~
     
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    This is good. It's intense.

    :hug: Take care of yourself kelly
     
  3. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Thank you rae.:hug: pls do the same
     
  4. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    This is sad..Good though. Stay safe, Kellz. :hug:
     
  5. snafu

    snafu Member

    ((((kanani)))) I relate
     
  6. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    thank u sus an snafu. Snafu I'm sorry you can relate :hug:
     
  7. Starsha

    Starsha Member

    That was good, sad, but good...

    I hate that I can relate. :(

    ~s
     
  8. very very well written kells , im so sorry though :hug:
     
  9. emma-louise

    emma-louise Guest

    :hug: it's well written Kells, i'm sorry that this is you, i'm sorry to all those who can relate :hug:
    <3
     
  10. Queen_Akasha

    Queen_Akasha Guest

    wow, that's a very intense piece of poetry. I'm so sorry that you feel this way, I really am, and if you ever need to talk, feel free to PM me. I know what it feels like to feel that way. I'm here if you'd wish to talk :hug:
     
  11. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    ems,
    it was more out of anger at the way someone made me feel. So it turned into this poem.:dunno:
     
  12. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Thank you akasha :hug:
     
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