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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Prinnctopher's Belt, Apr 16, 2013.

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  1. Prinnctopher's Belt

    Prinnctopher's Belt Antiquities Friend SF Supporter

    A lone schizoid
    staring,
    makes walls cry and surrender
    in pity.
    Social circles make empty orbits
    for lonely stars.
     
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I really like this poem. "Social circles make empty orbits/for lonely stars" - nice play on words and imagery - says so much with so few words.
     
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