Shit POEM!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by carbon monoxide perfume, Sep 15, 2007.

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  1. Like a stone, I hope the tide takes me away,
    Alone...
    Like a leaf in wind please take me away,
    From here...
    Like time hovering over my head,
    Stops...

    I wan't to keep trying but I,
    cant...
    I want to stop crying but I,
    cant...
    I want to stop hurting myself but I,
    cant..

    I guess nothing goes right,
    ever...
    I guess I will never get better,
    ever...
    I guess I'll be weak,
    forever...
     
  2. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    that isnt bad at all :)
    thank you for sharing it,
    it was powerfully written
     
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