Short Rhymes

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, Feb 10, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    The winter sky, such a beautiful hue,
    Reflected in your eyes so blue.
    You smiled at me but you had no clue,
    How wonderful you looked without much ado.
    Forgive me once if I stop and stare,
    To see that smallest smile so rare.

    Forgive me twice if I look away,
    But you take my breath away.

    Forgive me thrice, no more no less
    For putting you into that small nightdress.

    Needed to write a couple down before I forgot them. Rhymes form in my head and I must get them out somehow!

    PS. One, Two, Three, Four, Five. I'm still alive!
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    These are wonderful..please keep sharing them with us, J
  3. LipsOfDeceit

    LipsOfDeceit Well-Known Member

    That's pretty sweet. I like it. :]
  4. Ouroboros

    Ouroboros Chat Buddy

    Cool, these are awesome, short and sweet, keep them coming!
  5. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    nice short rhymes lovely xx
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