Short Rhymes

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, Feb 10, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    The winter sky, such a beautiful hue,
    Reflected in your eyes so blue.
    You smiled at me but you had no clue,
    How wonderful you looked without much ado.
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    Forgive me once if I stop and stare,
    To see that smallest smile so rare.

    Forgive me twice if I look away,
    But you take my breath away.

    Forgive me thrice, no more no less
    For putting you into that small nightdress.


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    Needed to write a couple down before I forgot them. Rhymes form in my head and I must get them out somehow!

    PS. One, Two, Three, Four, Five. I'm still alive!
    PSS. REMEMBER TO COMMENT!
     
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    These are wonderful..please keep sharing them with us, J
     
  3. LipsOfDeceit

    LipsOfDeceit Well-Known Member

    That's pretty sweet. I like it. :]
     
  4. Ouroboros

    Ouroboros Chat Buddy

    Cool, these are awesome, short and sweet, keep them coming!
     
  5. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    nice short rhymes lovely xx
     
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