*sigh* I am no poet, but here goes!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by appppppppple, Jun 5, 2008.

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  1. appppppppple

    appppppppple Member

    "Even my dreams fail"

    Walking upon the sun caressed valley
    I find myself in a hopeless daze
    There is nothing for me to do
    I had done it all, and regretted all of it
    The gentle breeze whispers into my ears
    that I cannot do anything
    that I'll never do anything
    that I am a failure

    This daze cannot be broken
    I cannot dream any longer
    I have dreamed of it all, and regretted it all
    I was wrong
    I can't reach any of my goals, my dreams
    I am a failure
    I cannot do anything
    I'll never do anything

    I am a failure
  2. carol2237

    carol2237 Guest

    *huggles* That was really quite well written hunny. I hope you feel better and know that you can do anything you set your mind to. Dont let this depression, or anything/anyone else tell you otherwise. *huggles* take care,

  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: great poem, but sad!!
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