Silence Falls

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Matt93, Feb 27, 2011.

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  1. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    As my moment came,
    I saw the ground below me,
    Fall away all the same,
    I believe I'm free.
    I am flying now,
    I am pushed back into my seat,
    I'm accelerating, don't know how,
    The scenes pass away so very neat.

    I reach the peak,
    Now I level out and become constant.
    My structure seems not weak,
    I have everything that I want.
    I strike some turbulence, become shaken,
    But I am built to last,
    In my troubles I become waken,
    But here I am reminded of my past.

    My cracks begin to show,
    Perhaps growing larger through the pressure.
    This struggle, not many others know,
    This trip was meant to be for my leisure.
    The nose dive begins,
    Fear stricken through us all.
    Fighting but I cannot win,
    I don't want to experience this fall.

    I plummet toward the ground
    Faster and faster
    Screaming, then BANG!
    Silence falls.​
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    If this is about a real event, I am so glad you are felt like I was there...thank you so much for sharing...this was quite adept...J
  3. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    You could call it a real event, but it's technically about being bipolar and on a high, and then suddenly crashing.

    I personified the flight of an aeroplane, and it's crash as me being on a high, and crashing.

    Thanks for your response, and when you say you felt like you were there, it makes me feel like I've accomplished a little more, as this was the intention.

    Thanks J :)
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    You are quite good, Matt..please keep sharing with us, J
  5. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    I will be doing so occasionally :)
    Thanks J :)
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