silence

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by wheresmysheep, Nov 5, 2008.

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  1. wheresmysheep

    wheresmysheep Staff Alumni

    ---This is the only poem i worte, i wrote it on the 21/1/05---

    I want to be silent,
    But scream at the top of my lungs,

    I want to be surrounded,
    But on my own,

    I want to be heard,
    But listen,

    I want pain,
    But not to feel,

    I want it to stop,
    But i can't.
     
  2. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    this is really good, I really understand what your saying, I really feel it. The first few lines especially moved me a lot.
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    thats an awesome poem emma! :hug:
     
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