Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by me myself and i, Apr 29, 2011.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Stale smoke with curtains drawn
    Full up ashtray, senses down
    Dirty plates and sinks of grime
    No intent, but age of time

    Empty bottles morning greet
    Metal mouth and crumpled seat
    Unswept floor and piled up mail
    Can you see my little tale?

    Silence loud from thought within
    Crashing sound, from that dropped pin
    No one knows, the lace hangs still
    i am here, the bitterest pill

    You can't see me, so i hide
    In your heart i have died
    I deserve because i do
    To live my life, away from you
  2. Kiba

    Kiba Well-Known Member

    :hug: I really like this poem. I think it really shows what you are feeling. Hope to maybe see more. :)
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.