Sitting in the dark

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, Nov 11, 2006.

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  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    I'm sitting in the dark
    Watching my life end
    On the big screen -
    Pictures flickering relentlessly
    As my hope is shattered.
    I sit calmly,
    Safe in the knowledge,
    Once I leave this auditorium, I will forget.
    I sit and watch.
    It became too much
    To touch, to feel,
    To be.
    The lights are dimmed, its dark
    As I watch myself crushed
    For the last time?
    The lights are dimmed, its dark,
    Who should notice
    If I were to
    This cinema screen?
  2. I would

    Your words are as clear in expression (the blessing) as they are painful to read (the curse). Light and dark, Yin - Yang, but you have a gift...

  3. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Then why do i hate it? I wish you could still edit posts...its not right. This is one of those moments where i wish i could just reach inside my mind and find what i want to conveys what i mean..its just not..right somehow. Damn i cant even explain what i mean now.

    Anyway, i know there are people that would. the question was who should? and the answer is no one.

    And You wouldn't.
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I would notice.:sad: Please don't leave the theatre!


  5. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    I won't, not if i can help it. I can't.

    And again I just want to raise the point of..should/would..not the same word.

    And just as a ps. i sincerely doubt that you would, if that were even in question.
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  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    :hug: :hug:
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