sky's falling

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ibetam, Feb 2, 2009.

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  1. ibetam

    ibetam Well-Known Member

    sky's falling, through oceans grey,
    an iron mist upon fields of fray.
    lonely, tranquil hate ebbs away,
    white, frozen, crystals of a day.
    immortal cold, fleeing those who pray,
    a maggot, fleeing where it may.
    undying, unending, deep delay,
    delay of words but what to say.
    an echo, an echo, not heard today,
    a phantom pleads us to slay.
    world's of ashen hearts obey,
    bled dry of our black dismay.
    ends of all stood with a way,
    sky's falling, crashing down today.
  2. soliloquise

    soliloquise Well-Known Member

    this would make a great song. do you have more?
  3. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    excellent! that was really great, well done.
  4. ibetam

    ibetam Well-Known Member

    thanks for the replies :) i used to write alot of 'on-the-spot' poems or short stories, just to try and capture thoughts. used to live a good life, trying to live the habits of recent years backwards and re-capture that life. i'll keep trying.
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

  6. justafool

    justafool Well-Known Member

    I hope you have found your way onto the printed page, or soon will. :tongue:
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