Sleeper Cell

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Aug 25, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    Sleeper Cell

    Watching all the people going by,
    Never saw them so happy,
    Feeling like a ghost,
    Lost in the city,
    When I never even new your name,
    I remember seeing them,
    Laughing, playing, crying,
    They seemed so pleased to be alive,
    That is when I knew,
    I knew I would never know your name.
     
  2. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    Thank you for sharing
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    YOu have created a mood of lonliness with your poem well written keep it up
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Thanks for sharing :arms:
     
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