Sleeping

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MoAnamCara, Aug 29, 2012.

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  1. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    Sleeping

    You always smiled
    And made others feel special.

    Your generosity and kindness
    Flowed effortlessly.

    Thank you for you
    And for sharing your life with me.

    Today I watched
    As you slept peacefully.

    And I wept
    Acknowledging, selfishly, my loss.

    Rest well my friend
    My sister, rest well.
     
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is perfect
     
  3. Astrid

    Astrid Member

    Great poem, very expressive of the feeling of grief.
     
  4. 1Lefty

    1Lefty Well-Known Member

    I like it, how you can express something so deep,
     
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