Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Isa, Feb 5, 2006.

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  1. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    you broke me
    snapped me apart
    you broke me
    and now i have no heart
    so many times
    run things over in my head
    that now its all engraved
    and my heart is dead
    i dont feel anything
    nothing at all
    you broke my heart
    and i just fall
    you live your happy life
    i let you have it
    i thought you were good to me
    you little shit
    i thought you were my angel
    you listened to my pain
    now your nothing to me
    except the reason im insane

    someone lock me up
    someone take me away
    someone make sure icant harm myself
    or anyone else today
    cos i wanna die tonight
    i wanna feel alright
    i wanna die tonight
    i want you to die too
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Wow Calisse, I can't exactly say that I liked it, although I think that you managed to express yourself very well, as you have in your other poems.

  3. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    thank you TDM. I posted them to link them to my big post.
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    That was surprisingly good...

    It had great emotion to it! :D
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: :hug:
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