So now my friend

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, May 5, 2006.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    So now we meet again, my friend.
    Eagerness and temptation has won.
    Embraced in the power that is of fate.
    Today is meant to be.

    Watching the waves hit the coast,
    and the whirling currents within.
    I gaze into your eyes, my friend,
    and be greatful we are together again.

    We talk for hours about all and nothing.
    Escape into the clouds of reality.
    Enjoying each others company, my friend.
    Hoping that this won't end.

    Every hour feels like a minute,
    the day is snatched infront of us.
    I don't want you to leave, my friend.
    Everything feels so right.

    Waiting for your train to pull in,
    the moment of sadness has arrived.
    I hug you for one last time, my friend.
    Then you disappear, but the warmness stays with me.
     
  2. Wow, that is so beautiful! (I'd digress, but selfishly like the echo of your words)

    "Escape into the clouds of reality" - that alone, says a thousand things (and all good - and powerful)...

    FAL1
     
  3. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    Thank you :) It's actually about my boyfriend, but putting "my boyfriend" at the end of the lines didn't quite sound as right as "friend", but I guess my boyfriend is my best friend so it's okay. I'm glad you like it.
     
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :clap: that's great hun. That is such powerful poem. thank you so much for sharing it!!! :hug: :clap:



    :lips:


    xxxxxxxxxx
     
  5. "Thank you It's actually about my boyfriend, but putting "my boyfriend" at the end of the lines didn't quite sound as right as "friend", but I guess my boyfriend is my best friend so it's okay."

    Anyone we’re so close to, doesn’t have to be designated (IMHO) other than “Friend” – sacred all-around, no? In meaning and deed. Seems you have a good grasp on distance as well as closeness (both healthy *and* welcome in proper measure). 'Made me smile from my heart...again...

    :eek:)

    FAL1
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow...

    i loved it...

    it was so cute!!!

    BP
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Fabulous :heart:
     
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