Discussion in 'I Have a Question...' started by Anon4Now, Feb 5, 2008.

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  1. Anon4Now

    Anon4Now Guest


    Tonight is cold.
    I am alone.
    Fog fills the distance.
    The icy water beckons.

    Should I go?

    What darkness lies
    Between the seas
    And skies?
    What shadows hide
    And pull beneath
    The waves?

    They beckon...

    Shall I go?

    The murk furls and curls -
    envelops me.
    The damp is dank.
    The chill is wet (but welcome).

    I hear my name.

    Obscurity obliges,
    And I am called
    To the water's wet edges,
    Where the depths are dim as dusk.

    I must go.
    I cannot interfere.
    I am summoned,
    And I must commit
    To the end of fear -
    To the end of now
    And here.

    I am concealed.
    My breath is raw.

    The cold has overtaken.
  2. Nessarose

    Nessarose Well-Known Member

    You write beautifully, but your poem worries me. Stay and talk with us? Please be safe.
  3. This is a very beautiful poem.
  4. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    this is a beautiful poem. i hope you register and post more in the poetry section.
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    beautiful poem:smile:
  6. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Your words make the unspoken turmoil leap to life. Well done.
  7. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    Great writing, I think you should join the forum pal
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