Solitary Confinement

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by L108935, Apr 3, 2010.

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  1. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    As a hot knife in a sheath
    Words stay in my teeth
    Gray carpet fully covers
    Hardwood floors beneath

    Magnetic adrenaline
    Nearly rips my skin
    Homicidal ex-lovers
    Understated sin

    March in line to keep the trend
    Although it might end
    Indignation discovers
    How to kill a "friend"

    Solitary confinement
    Straightens alignment
    Gray rains down to uncover
    My next assignment
  2. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    This was so very cool, it gave me chills. It's hard to pick just one favorite line, there's just so many good ones.

    This makes me think of under cover spies ("My next assignment "). They use their wits to gain's someone trust. Once their mission is accomplished, they have to get rid of them "(how to kill a friend").
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    great use of wording
  4. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    Thanks peoples :)
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