Solo Abyss

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Feb 19, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Amidst the darkened ruins of my life,
    Lays a bottomless pit of sorrows will.
    The tears that fall seemingly ever faster,
    Freeze in the heartbeat of winters chill.

    Away from peace of unities solemn tie,
    My soul shivers alone in desperate hope.
    Wishing the impossible wish of future joy,
    But realizing the worlds out of my control.

    I kneel aching in empties solo abyss,
    Praying for the end of the tormentors glee.
    Sadly its groping becomes ever stronger,
    Diminishing my mind and desire to flee.

    I now surrender to the tormentors cold call,
    Giving into ascendancies frightening show.
    Following it to the depth of evils torture,
    For I and love together hath never known.
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Again so well written your pain your angst hugs
  3. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Thank you. I try not to make them specific, because I feel more people can enjoy them if they can personalize with it.
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