Some Poet's i wrote

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jakke, Oct 29, 2006.

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  1. Jakke

    Jakke New Member

    Brighter Side
    my life
    what does it say
    my life
    what does it want
    my life
    what do i want
    my life
    where does it end
    my life
    ends here
    im death
    my life will continue
    not here
    but at a brighter side.


    The Sky
    Sometimes
    just sometimes
    ...i take a close
    look to the sky
    in the night
    makes me think
    what i did wrong this day
    or what i did right
    but after all
    does it even matter
    after all
    thoughts kill you


    The People I Love
    The pictures of my wall
    people...
    i still have to meet
    i love them
    these pictures
    people...
    i still have to meet
     
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I like the first one best.

    TDM
     
  3. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    I like them all, but the first one is really good too! :hug: thanks so much for sharing your poems with us, it was a great treat. :hug: :clap:
     
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