Some See...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, May 8, 2006.

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  1. Some See

    Some see weakness
    as a sign of fault.
    The only ‘fault’ there is
    is where the crack lies,
    and more, why ~

    Some see sharing
    as a sign of health,
    a way to wealth
    not able to be measured,
    but more, treasured…

    Some see Life
    as an endless journey.
    Full of yearning,
    full of worry.
    I’ve been on the road,
    and there are some heavy loads
    one cannot carry alone.
    So caring is the seed that’s sown,
    and look how they have grown,
    among these fellow travelers…

    Some think salvation
    lies in The End,
    when sometimes all one needs
    is a listening friend
    who’ll dare look inside your heart,
    which in the end,
    is just the start…

  2. Lowcorn

    Lowcorn Active Member

    anouther amazeing poem. Well done
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear Found;

    YOu are truly very talented. :smile: I really like the way you express your thoughts in words. Another excellent poem! :clap: Keep 'em coming!!

  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow such a great poem...

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