Some things take too long to say

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Matt93, Mar 31, 2011.

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  1. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    Sadness stricken deep within,
    Some things take too long to say.
    Like burning bones from therein,
    Their fate is sealed to end that day.

    With every ounce of strength,
    We have tried to push the weight from our shoulders.
    Some times we have gone to unimaginable length,
    Trapped in cave sealed with a thousand boulders.

    No man should ever endure the torment,
    That wretches like I have to each and every day.
    Thrown around between 'professionals' without consent,
    I never asked to be this way.

    Author: - Me
     
  2. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    you spoke the words in my heart. your well written words bring tears to my eyes
     
  3. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    I hope that meant you liked it :)

    My head hurts, and I lose the ability to work. But I never lose the ability to write these kind of things. I guess it's "my thing" that seems to just be natural to me. That I'm glad.

    Thanks for saying it was well written :)
     
  4. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    i do like it, may i copy it, and keep it as a banner on my computer?

    i understand that, i lost my ability to function, think, eat. i need to write to keep from hurting myself. I hope we can Pm, and talk, its nice to be able to talk to a fellow writer.

    it is well written, on that the truth is simply spoken.
     
  5. Matt93

    Matt93 Well-Known Member

    You're welcome to use it as a banner on your computer. That really makes me feel as if I have achieved something. Feel free to PM any time you wish, and I will reply as soon as I possibly can :)
     
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