'Someone Said'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Mar 1, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Someone said hello to me
    As I passed them walkng by
    I pretended not to hear their words
    My lungs let out a sigh
    I didnt know them anyways
    I really dont know why
    They bothered saying hi to me
    I never will reply...

    Dont reach to me
    I wont grab back
    Dont preach to me
    I'll twist the slack
    Dont try for me
    Cause I'll let go
    Dont cry for me
    You'll never know
    Why lonely solidarity
    Is all that still appeals to me
    I dont want to feel
    I dont care to see
    Dont bother saying hi to me.

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    As always, a masterpiece at expressing feelings so well and so succinctly.:clap: I love and respect your ability with writing and look forward to each new one.:smile:

    love, Sooz xoxoxox
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I wont say 'hi' but I truly got what you wrote...thanks...Jackie
  4. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    you are very welcome...

    my friends.
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    i really like your work hun! keep it up!

    Love BP
  6. hi.... er... no.... hello!!...

    you show your feelings really well in your work.... :hug:

  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    awesome poem hun :D
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