Something from my heart...

Discussion in 'Suicidal Thoughts and Feelings' started by touglytobeloved, May 23, 2008.

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  1. touglytobeloved

    touglytobeloved Well-Known Member

    I wrote a poem, and I have decided to post it here, in my native language, and I will post the translation in english.
     
  2. touglytobeloved

    touglytobeloved Well-Known Member

    FOREVER

    A bird start to sing. I didn’t heard. I was listening you.
    The sun start to shine. I didn’t see. I was looking at you.
    I was floating somewhere there, together with you. I was happy.
    Happy and in love.

    And then you left. And everything was empty.
    And the bird has stopped singing, and the sun has hide.
    Rain, fog, darkness and coldness in my soul.

    And I was walking somewhere. I was looking for you.
    I was walking on the road I didn’t knew. I was looking for you.
    But I didn’t find you. And I realized that you are gone.

    I fall asleep, and you were there. In my dream.
    I wake up and I thought of you. You were gone.
    Yes, you were gone, it was just a dream.

    And then I realized. You were there.
    I wasn’t seeing you, but I was feeling you. Yes, you were there.
    You have never left. You will never leave.
    You will stay here forever, in my heart.
     
  3. Gunner12

    Gunner12 Well-Known Member

    Wow, very powerful.

    I'm glad you posted it.
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    it's awesome:smile: thanks for sharing hun :hug:
     
  5. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    That is so beautiful. :hug: :hug:
     
  6. BioHomocide

    BioHomocide Well-Known Member

    Wow that poem is very touching... I loved it!

    Can I ask what language that is before it was translated into English?
     
  7. ZundertowZ

    ZundertowZ Well-Known Member

    that was an awsome poem! u r very talented!
     
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