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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Spiral, Dec 5, 2006.

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  1. Spiral

    Spiral Guest

    Even if I had no enemies,
    I'd still be waging this war,
    'Cause all of these memories,
    Gave me something to fight for.
    But, even if I reach the end,
    I may not survive,
    I swear to god I'll try to fend,
    And I'll be praying that I'm alive.

    We're all slaves to the fear,
    But come my fellow soilders,
    Don't stop fighting here,
    These shoulders can hold boulders,
    And this face shed not a tear.
    We'll hang on for longer,
    Watch as all the smoke clears,
    I promise we'll come out stonger,
    Just keep holding on my peers.

    I've watched everything crumble,
    But I'm still holding on,
    You cannot make me stumble,
    You cannot beat the strong.
    Point this gun to my head,
    And take as many shots,
    Take note I have not fled,
    I will fight more than once.

    All I can pray,
    Is that we won't give in,
    We will fight to the day,
    The day we will win,
    The day we see justice,
    Our battle not vain,
    'Cause my only wish,
    Is to be free from the pain.

    x :biggrin:
  2. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    Oh wow, beautiful!
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Absolutely beautiful!!:smile: Lovely in it's poetic 'readability'. Wonderful in its speaking for so many of us. What a gift!!:smile:


  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    it was beautiful... and had true meaning...

    thanks for sharing...

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