Song for a girl

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Oct 22, 2006.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    This is a song
    For a girl
    Who like me tried to save her world
    A girl who fought
    For what is right
    And made her point
    Through what she writes

    This is a song
    For a girl
    A girl whose plan will one day unfurl
    A girl who fought
    And tried to be strong
    But really wanted
    To belong

    This is a song
    For a girl
    Who tries her best to not give in
    A girl who saved
    Everyone else
    But like me
    She couldn’t save herself

    This is a song
    For that girl
    The girl who tried to save her world
    The girl who tried
    To be strong
    But realised true strength
    Is admitting when you’re wrong
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much, TDM!!:smile: :smile:

    love,

    least
     
  3. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    You have your lyrics TDM. Now set it to music :). It will be beautiful. :hug:
     
  4. I love the song..

    But I don't understand the last line.
    It sounds judgemental
    What was 'she' wrong about,
    with such previous praise?

    FAL1
     
  5. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    :O so good.
     
  6. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    The last line is admittedly a bit odd... I dont really know why I put it there, but the last line sorta explains that true strength is admitting that you cant do it all by yourself and that its better to ask for help, because she tried to save everyone and everything singlehandedly, and failed.

    And maybe I will set it to music, eventually, although I prolly cant get anyone to sing it, and I cant really sing, LOL.

    Thanks for your replies everyone. :grouphug:

    TDM
     
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