Song lyrics... For our skacore band (Constructive criticism)

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    Lyrics 1 (Titled: Fuck You (Working on another name))

    You seemed in trouble, so I tried to be nice,
    I sent you a message, and gave you advice,
    You shat on it all, turned into an ass,
    You're a piece of shit, I hope you fail every class,
    Drop out of school, start doing coke,
    Fuck up your life, I hope you choke,
    I hope failure follows everything that you do,
    I don't feel bad because I fucking hate you.

    You gave up on me, and made some new friends,
    But you know they'll leave you in the end,
    They front all tough, pretend to be strong,
    If you think they're better than us you're dead wrong.

    You defend him like he's never done anything bad,
    I call him out on his shit and then you get mad,
    But he's a poser, just like every other person,
    But I can't talk to you, it'll just make things worse and,
    He's going nowhere and he's lazy and dumb,
    Have fun marrying him, and saving every crumb,
    Take off your rosy red glasses and see him for who he is,
    One day you'll realize and say "Anythings better than this"
    (And I'll laugh)

    You gave up on me, and made some new friends,
    But you know they'll leave you in the end,
    They front all tough, pretend to be strong,
    If you think they're better than us you're dead wrong.

    Promises of forever always turn to rust

    Lyrics 2 (Titles: The Things That He Says)

    I've got a good reason to hate you,
    You think you're innocent now, but I see through
    Everything that you say, and everything that you do,
    You say I'm a fuck up, but you are too,

    And you say he makes you happy,
    You say he fulfills everything that we couldn't, but
    You say he's your everything,
    We should tell you you're wrong, but we know that we shouldn't...

    You say one thing to her, and another to us,
    It's getting to be too much, too much,
    Do everything you say, you'll do to me if you must,
    I just don't care, those are words you can trust.

    And you say he makes you happy,
    You say he fulfills everything that we couldn't, but
    You say he's your everything,
    We should tell you you're wrong, but we know that we shouldn't...

    And you say that he makes you happy,
    You say that he's your everything, oh
    And you say that he makes you happy,
    You say that he's your everything, yeah

    And I know I'm a fuck up, depression's my curse,
    But you're just an asshole, and I think that's worse,
    And she'll never know, the things that he says,
    And she'll never know,
    The things, The things that he says.

    And you say he makes you happy,
    You say he fulfills everything that we couldn't, but
    You say he's your everything,
    We should tell you you're wrong, but we know that we shouldn't...

    Great to have some comments, constructive criticism, or anything. Imagine the songs with breakdowns, or screams, or trumpets and trombone riffs, and you get the idea.
     
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